Maison'Ella


 * //Hi i am Maison-Ella,//**
 * //I am 10 years old in may (2010),//**
 * //I like to horse ride, hang out with horses, play with my pets, and hang out with my friends.//**
 * //I'm from NZ (New Zealand).//**
 * //My friends at Raumati Beach School are Zara, Emily, and Ruby,//**
 * //my friends at ctms are Christina, Rhiannon!!!//**
 * //At school i like art, reading and playing with friends!!!!//**
 * //After school i hang out with friends, play on my computer, do homework, play with pets!!!//**

**//The Golden Sword!(An Adventure!)//**

 * //One day in the late 2000 Maison-Ella Mann was sent on a quest for a golden sword and a girl named Zara. This is how it all started.//**


 * //Maison-Ella was in her house playing with her dog when 4 girls and 1 boy barged inside. First came Milly, then came Abby, then Amiee, Christina, then sprinting his poor little legs off came Abby's little brother James. "Who are you and why are you here?" asked Maison-Ella. "Hi I'm Milly and this is Abby, Amiee, Christina, and here comes James" replied Milly. "We are here to get the golden sword! Oh and our friend Zara! Will you help us?" asked James. "Ok but can I bring Molly my dog?" said Maison-Ella "Sure you can" replied Amiee. "Lets get going before it gets dark" said Abby " But I need a rest" said poor little James who had been sprinting like a horse.//**


 * //When James had rested they got on with there trip//**.


 * //When they got to the Misty Mountains they stopped in a very cozy cave for the night. When they were asleep Molly started barcking because the drogons had woken up. "RUN!" screamed Amiee "What?" asked Christina, 'Its a dragon!" said Maison "AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" they all screamed. "Hey look its Zara and the Golden Sword!!!!" said James, Abby, and Christina. "Lets get them" said Amiee.//**


 * //They got Zara, The Golden Sword, and they all got out safely. The 6 friends went home in one piece!!!!//**


 * //The End!!!!!!!!!!!!!!//**
 * //By Maison-Ella!!//**

y - Term 2 || Not at all || Sometimes || All the time || Linking, sloping, maths, spelling.
 * Assessment for writing
 * · I can write for a range of purposes across the curriculum ||  || y ||   ||
 * · I can spell most words and underline words I am not sure are spelt correctly, ||  || y ||   ||
 * · I can mostly use punctuation correctly ||  ||   || y ||
 * · I can write using relevant content which includes detail and / or comment which supports the main ideas ||  || y ||   ||
 * · I can uses paragraphs to support main ideas ||  || y ||   ||
 * · I can use correct grammar ||  || y ||   ||
 * · I can use topic specific language ||  || y ||   ||
 * · I can use adjectives and verbs to make my writing more interesting. ||  || y ||   ||
 * This term I have got better at….

Next step : By the end of this term I will get better at……… Spelling and Maths. ||